It
has been more than one year since I entered this school, KMLA. As I attend this
school, many things happen to me; sometimes awkward thing, sometimes happy
things, or sometimes funny things. As I experience these moments, I recognize “friends”
are the most important and valuable things in my life. Friends make me happy
and experience and fun, and help me when I am depressed or having hard days.
Because I know that friends are the most valuable treasure in my life, there
are lots of photos taken with my friends in my computer. My photo essay will be
about my friends in KMLA.
It
was December 14th 2011, after the final exam of the 2nd
semester in KMLA. We—Park Kee Ryun, Koo Han Gyeol, Hwang Soo Shin and me—went to
Kyeong Po. We just planned to go there without a specific schedule.
Spending
time with something, we found a big snowman which was really well made. We didn’t
have time to make a new and big snowman, because we had to eat dinner. So we
just took this picture with the made snowman. I put my camera on a big and wide
stick, and set the time for 5 seconds. Then we gathered together around the
snowman and took that picture. Although we didn’t make this snowman, this photo
shows the feelings and the scenes that we experienced at that time.
This
photo is a symbol of friendship. To take this photo, after the final exams, we
went to Kyeong Po beach and played and talked together. Although there is
nothing that shows the process before taking this picture, it shows that all
four people are closely related, harmonious and well-fit together.
As
well, this photo contains the feeling of being “refreshed.” After the hard time
(the final exam), we refreshed our minds and waited for the new start. I
reviewed my life in KMLA as a freshman, and thought about my problems. And I
knew that past things couldn’t be revised, so I did not regret that I did
wrong. I just thought to change my behavior, and hoped not to repeat the same
problems. As I took pictures with my friends, I reorganized my mind and
promised myself to have a new life in KMLA.
“Freedom”
is one of the important values that is implied in this photo. Life in KMLA is
really harsh. Students are in an environment where they should compete with
each other without leisure time to feel freedom and relaxation due to lots of
assignments. But when I played with my friends, it was really happy because I
could fee freedom. No competitors or harsh environment, but simply friends and
an open scene.
It
is so nice to reminisce about the happiest day during my KMLA life. This photo
helps me to recharge when I am so tired of my life as a student. As I look at
this photo, I think about that day for an hour and crave for the future
peaceful and happy days.
P.S. Friends are really important in my
life.
Much better - but not perfect.:) Still some sloppy stuff you overlook. Even some really obvious spelling errors - such as feel spelled "fee." I hope you revise in MS Word so that stuff shows up.
답글삭제Your participation score will go up by completing these rewrites. Good work.